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It\'s Time for the sweet stuff
Old 12-27-2005, 10:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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[list] New to posting, Please let me know if I am doing anything wrong. Just need some ideas for impovement of my work. Thanks
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Re: It\'s Time for the sweet stuff
Old 12-27-2005, 11:47 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Welcome to the joint.
I'll let the real pros do most of the critiques, but to me she doesn't look very comfortable with her arm on her side that way. Also the crease there in her side to me isn't flattering. But, JMO. and I'm learning just like anyone else. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/crazy.gif[/img]

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Re: It\'s Time for the sweet stuff
Old 12-28-2005, 01:22 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice photo, great idea too. I agree with lobo's comments on the arm. Maybe if you had her stretch her hand farther down her hip, have a little seperation there. I think it also looks a little soft around the eyes, maybe it's just from resizing though.

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Re: It\'s Time for the sweet stuff
Old 12-28-2005, 11:09 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I think that if she sihifted her right hip back further, it would open up her entire mid-section and would remove some of the lines and creases. Adjusting her arm so that it's not laying against the side of her body would help show more of her natural curves as well.

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Re: It\'s Time for the sweet stuff
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There are a number of great things with this photo! Keep it up and slightly improve the pose and your there. Nice use of the flowers and outfit! Lighting was cool as well!

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Re: It\'s Time for the sweet stuff
Old 12-28-2005, 10:00 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments, I appreicate your time to comment and the encouragement you gave. It alway helps to get other's opinions.
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Old 12-28-2005, 10:08 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I appreicate you takeing time to critique this photo, that is what I wanted. Often I get caught up in the other parts such as lighting and etc that I do not look at the whole pic.

I agree the arm does look uncomfortable.

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