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Old 12-26-2005, 08:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Please critique
Old 12-26-2005, 09:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It took me a moment to figure out what it was she was doing. I couldnt tell what that was in her hand. I think maybe a recrop? As for lighting and softness really nice. Oh and her bra seemed a bit loose that time as well. Like it was too big for her or something.
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Old 12-27-2005, 01:41 AM   #3 (permalink)
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This really shows off the beautiful smoothness of her skin well; she's gorgeous and has wonderful eyes.

Two minor things that I'd be tempted to change would be a slightly wider crop, and with her face turned that far toward the camera, I'd like to see both sides of the whites of both eyes.

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Old 12-27-2005, 08:46 AM   #4 (permalink)
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The lighting is nice, the model looks good. The image has a nice soft feeling to it that I like. I think my only objection would be the crop. Because it takes a moment to figure out what it is, and then scratch my head about why it is there, it takes away from the image. Use the "all or nothing" theory. Either it helps or hurts the image and is removed, replaced, or remains based upon that criteria.

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