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1st attempt at MAXIM/FHM look
Old 12-20-2005, 07:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A shot of a talented hairstylist that I work with on occasion. She asked me to shoot her as a favor.
The compression made the image a bit soft, but let me know what I could have done better otherwise.
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Re: 1st attempt at MAXIM/FHM look
Old 12-20-2005, 08:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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She asked me to shoot her as a favor.

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This Happens????

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Re: 1st attempt at MAXIM/FHM look
Old 12-21-2005, 03:30 AM   #3 (permalink)
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A couple things that I see right off...

Where's her right arm?

Her wrist angle is...Uh...Kinda creepy...

Try throwing a silver reflector on the floor in front of her, out of frame. This will help soften the shadow lines (but won't kill them and flatten her) on her side toward the camera. The gold side will make her go green (if her natural skin tone is what I think it is).

Keep shooting!

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definition of MAXIM look
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When the model says they want to do Maxim style, what they are really saying:

"I want to be in a big magazine but I don't want to show the goods!"

Not bad...what the other guys said, and you can reduce the compression issues by sizing the pics to a web size like 600X800 pixels before you do anything with them.

lets see more from the shoot.

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Re: 1st attempt at MAXIM/FHM look
Old 12-22-2005, 08:26 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Where is her right arm? And the left arm being straigth/vertical bothers me. But other than the arms it's a fun shot. I would use the doorway as a posing prop for her arms.
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Re: 1st attempt at MAXIM/FHM look
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Not Bad, would be better minus the hair in her eye. A little more power to the strobe with the red gel. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]
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