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Old 12-19-2005, 01:44 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I had the opportunity to shoot with a new model last week. She did a great job. She followed instructions very well, and once she gets more comfortable she'll do spectacularly.

We started out with some headshots (as yet unprocessed), but I liked the back of her blouse so we shot this. Aside from the fact that I forgot to pay attention to the position of the hair light when we turned her around...what do you think?

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Old 12-19-2005, 12:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Brian.

I am afraid this pose just doesn't work for me. The position of her arms works to narrow her back at the shoulders, which does not flatter the shape of her back (in my view).
We do not see a profile of her breasts to give her shape, so I think the shapliness of her back needs to be emphasised. Having seen your "fitness" post of her I am sure a back view could be more attractive than I find this one.
I am not sure what I would do to improve it, but I just know it lacks something in my opinion. All this is subjective of course, but I thought I would share my thoughts.

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Old 12-20-2005, 02:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I'm sure that's true. I had setup my lights for headshots, and simply turned her around on the stool for this shot. Thanks for the input.
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