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Old 12-11-2005, 10:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 12-11-2005, 11:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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What do I think? I think they are both beautiful!!!

Sorry I couldnt add a critique,couldnt find anything wrong with them!!


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Old 12-12-2005, 12:41 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Both are nice portraits and not your "normal" style seen here. The black and white seems a little flat, but then, you may have wanted it that way.
The color image has more contrast and is quite nice, except I would have left the fingers of her left hand in the crop. -Jim

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Old 12-12-2005, 12:58 AM   #4 (permalink)
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thanx for your feedback ... however, what do you mean by "flat"? Forgive my ignorance but I am still new to this and don't know what all these terms mean
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Old 12-12-2005, 02:10 AM   #5 (permalink)
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They are both beautifull!
Maybe the first one have the focus on the nose instead of the eyes (but maybe are my "fake" eyes!!!)

Great job

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Old 12-12-2005, 10:35 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Excellent captures. The only critique concerning the "flatness" of the first one would be different from the "focus on the nose" quite the opposite. If the eyes were more detailed such as seperation in the eyelashes...just a bit more detail and focus on the eyes, I beleive it would "pop" and not be "flat". Play with the USM a bit and see if you can tweak out the eyes a bit.

Great shots though... so please keep posting [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Old 12-12-2005, 10:36 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I really like #1. Very well done. If I were going to do anything to attempt to improve it, I'd clone out the small bit of clothing that's showing at the bottom...since it disrupts her neckline. A beautiful image, though!

#2 is okay, but doesn't do much for me. I think it's the pose. The lighting is fine, but I don't care for the way she's holding her arms and looking out of the frame. But that's a purely personal thing.
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Play with the contrast levels on every image and see what pleases you.
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Old 12-12-2005, 11:16 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Number 1 - Pupils too large for my taste. Skin is soft in places. Shadows on the broad lit side almost look like bruises.

Number 2 - eyes are strained too much to one side. However, it gives a sense of running away so some emotion and flow is there....

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Old 12-12-2005, 11:56 PM   #10 (permalink)
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I think you did a damn nice job. Picture #2 is really cool.
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