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Old 12-10-2005, 12:26 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I'm very much an amateur but would appreciate some feedback on where I can improve most.

Lighting was one SB600 into an umbrella and a silver reflector (car sun protector). The background was just some white sheets which I have replaced with what I hope to be a reasonable imitation of white seamless in PS.


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Old 12-10-2005, 06:59 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Not bad,
As a beginner myself I use any trick I can. My only thought here is that the sparkle of the earing may be to much. To me it overpowers the overall photo.
But then what do I know. just my thought.
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Old 12-10-2005, 08:47 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the feedback Frank. Are the shadows on the floor and the background convincing enough?

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My only thought here is that the sparkle of the earing may be to much.

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I'm in two minds about the sparkle but Roz likes it, so that settles it. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Old 12-10-2005, 09:40 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Im with lobo on this one...lose the sparkle and you have a Good Image!
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Old 12-10-2005, 10:08 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Im with lobo on this one...lose the sparkle and you have a Good Image!

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Ok. I've removed the sparkle. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] Thanks for the feedback Don.


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Old 12-10-2005, 10:10 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Much better..now her eyes are the center of attention...not the sparkle.
Keep shooting and posting!!
nice to see new work around here!!



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Old 12-10-2005, 10:11 AM   #7 (permalink)
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The only shadow problem I see are around the front of her feet. Look at your light direction and then look at the shadows in front of her toes. Would that be a natural shadow? In my mind I don't think so.
The rest of the shadows are soft enough to not matter I think. But this is just my opinion.
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Old 12-10-2005, 10:14 AM   #8 (permalink)
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This is much better, it brings her eyes out now.
uumm, Don and I agree on something. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/crazy.gif[/img]
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Old 12-10-2005, 10:23 AM   #9 (permalink)
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The only shadow problem I see are around the front of her feet.

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Yes That bothers me too. I actually added that at the end because she seemed to be floating. I'll go back and try to fix it.
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Old 12-16-2005, 09:41 AM   #10 (permalink)
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kudos for the pose. In my experience, that pose can be difficult for the model. to hunker down like that, supporting their wieght on the knees and calves can come off poorly. If she likes the flare, maybe decrease the intensity and even put some color in it.

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