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Old 12-08-2005, 07:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here is my latest attempt. Hopefully, there is improvement.
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Re: Another try
Old 12-08-2005, 07:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Sure wish it was bigger for a critique.
but here goes from what I can see, I think the tipping the brim thing is bit harder to pull off than you'd think, she really doesnt seem to be tippin the brim in this one. her left eye trying to look thru her nose isnt attractive either. if you would have hand her turn her head toward the camera and tilted down just a bit. I think you could have solved these issues.

Just My 2.00 worth after all it is christmas!!! much better to give than recieve!!!

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Re: Another try LARGER Image
Old 12-08-2005, 07:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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If it isn't learning how to take photos, post processing, or a thousand other things, it is learning how to post the photos so they look good online.

Hopefully this will work. [img]http://rds.yahoo.com/_ylt=Agm7zPS59iFG30UhV.eBVPBXNyoA;_ylu=X3oDMTB0MXN uNGUxBGNvbG8DZQRzZWMDbm9yZXMEdnRpZANGNTYxXzgx/SIG=139aef59l/EXP=1134176048/**http%3a//webpages.charter.net/legacyplacephotography/additional%2520photos/CRW_7427web.jpg[/img]
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Re: Another try LARGER Image
Old 12-09-2005, 08:31 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hi Dan,

Nice concept but I tend to agree with Don about the pose. Also, I think her arms tucked tightly in to her sides makes her look a litle nervous. Maybe move her arms away from her body and give a more confident look.

The image looks a litle bit washed out on my monitor and I think it might benefit from some levels adjustment.

Just my opinions of course.

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