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Just another of Jill
Old 12-07-2005, 01:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Need input on skin. Does it look washed out on your monitor? I like the shot, just color looks soft to me.

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Re: Just another of Jill
Old 12-07-2005, 01:33 PM   #2 (permalink)
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In MHO, I think it looks good. But than I like a more natural tone. Maybe I'm not as artsy as others.
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Re: Just another of Jill
Old 12-07-2005, 10:36 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Awesome framing. Awesome look. But if there could be any improvement it'd be to bring the saturation/colors up. On my monitor the skin tones look a little too similar. But that said, I think your shot looks gorgeous.
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Re: Just another of Jill
Old 12-08-2005, 02:29 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I can't really add anything that hasn't already been said, but damn she's beautiful, and you did a great job shooting her. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img]
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Re: Just another of Jill
Old 12-16-2005, 09:44 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Doesn't look washed out here. Looks like she has very nice, fair skin.
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Old 12-16-2005, 10:40 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Nice shot. I think the skin tones match the mood perfectly.
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Re: Just another of Jill
Old 12-17-2005, 04:46 AM   #7 (permalink)
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The colours look very natural on my monitor. You would expect colours to be more muted in a shady location like this, and I think it looks right.

I like the use of the shallow depth of field to de-emphasise the background. She is a very beautiful lady, and this is a very nice photograph.

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Old 12-18-2005, 04:38 PM   #8 (permalink)
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The shot is great. I think I see what you are seeing though. It is not the skin tone, it is the entire shot. It has that very faint grey gause (my favourite word today) over the entire shot. If this is taken with a digital SLR it is probably slightly under exposed I think then. I get the grey gause in my shots too. A small touch up with photoshop levels and that should clear up any wash out of the color. Cheers.

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Old 12-22-2005, 08:29 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I think the skin is perfect to work with. In PS you could use curves to make the skin pop/glow.
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Old 12-23-2005, 03:37 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Pull this out and view it in PS with the gray matte blocking the rest of the screen. Not the black matte, and not surrounded by white as it is here. I think you'll see that it's just right.

Now, that having been said, she's going to look a bit wwashed out because she's not overly tan, and she's standing next to a tree with dark bark. The color difference is going to fool yer eyes.

On my monitor it looks exactly as it should if I were standing there, in terms of color. Could it stand to be a bit warmer? Sure. Does it need to be? Nope.
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