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Old 12-03-2005, 01:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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first time with this model but something a little different need comments

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I'm no pro, but I'd suggest a couple things. Have her bend her back knee; that'll force her to drop her hip and make the image feel more dynamic. It'll also straighten out the couple creases where her right leg meets her bottom. Also, have her rotate her torso a little more towards you to show some cleavage and really stretch out those nice abs.

All in all, a nice shot.
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I would agree with bgphoto on the body positioning. I would also include a hair light to create seperation from the background. Her hair is blending in with background and making the image too flat. Great attempt with a great model!
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