Lens Diaries Go Now
Glamour, Beauty, Nude, Models, Photographers

*    |  Register  


 
Go Back   Garage Glamour™ > Garage Glamour™ Community Related Forumss > Photo Reviews & Critiques Only
 

Photo Reviews & Critiques Only Constructive & professional critiques only

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
MY FIRST POST!!!!! how EXCITING!!!!
Old 11-30-2005, 01:33 AM   #1 (permalink)
Free Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Member GG#: 45574
Posts: 33
Comments: 0

sydastarkyle is offline IP: 216.185.181.42
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

here it is kids......have fun!




click it for a larger view....sorry... im new!
  View Public Profile Send a private message to sydastarkyle Find More Posts by sydastarkyle
 
Re: MY FIRST POST!!!!! how EXCITING!!!!
Old 11-30-2005, 03:12 AM   #2 (permalink)
Free Member

 
zytkiewicz's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2005
Member GG#: 43029
Location: Madison, WI
Posts: 196
Comments: 0

zytkiewicz is offline IP: 24.158.13.225
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Kyle,

The first thing is that even your larger picture is smaller than most people prefer. Now, looking at the image I don't feel that the models expressions match, the shorter one has a serious, piercing look, and the taller one is sort of a half smile. Each of them alone I think would be great but together they just don't mesh.

The other thing I see is the light on the taller models face, creates a line down her cheek and the 2 different color skin tones.

Other than that I think you've captured them very well, keep shooting I'd like to see more.


((this isn't one of my best pictures just something we were fooling around with towards the end of the shoot))

  View Public Profile Send a private message to zytkiewicz Visit zytkiewicz's homepage! Find More Posts by zytkiewicz
 
Re: MY FIRST POST!!!!! how EXCITING!!!!
Old 11-30-2005, 10:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
Free Member

 
Brad's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Member GG#: 45608
Location: Tampa
Posts: 587
Comments: 3

Brad is offline IP: 70.119.153.110
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Just not sure.
  View Public Profile Send a private message to Brad Visit Brad's homepage! Find More Posts by Brad
 
Re: MY FIRST POST!!!!! how EXCITING!!!!
Old 12-01-2005, 02:22 AM   #4 (permalink)
Free Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2005
Member GG#: 45079
Location: Fairview Heights
Posts: 28
Comments: 0

Phillipphoto is offline IP: 70.225.56.205
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

I agree with the advice on the shadow on the face. It draws your attention away from the models and to that detail.
Keep posting. There is a lot to learn on this site.


-Phillip
  View Public Profile Send a private message to Phillipphoto Visit Phillipphoto's homepage! Find More Posts by Phillipphoto
 
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Post some workshop pics or die. icuphotography Main Community Forum 10 05-01-2010 09:35 AM
Post processing challenge ... R_Fredrick_Smith Digital Darkroom 19 05-12-2007 09:49 AM
How do I post an image in a thread in the new system? DocSmith Main Community Forum 7 04-10-2007 04:52 PM


New To Site? Need Help? Photographer & Model Links
All times are GMT -5. The time now is 04:33 PM.

© 1999-2017 Garage Glamour™




Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.2.0

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93