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Old 11-19-2005, 08:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello everyone I have not been around much lately been real busy with my day job. I have been wanting to post some images from my second shoot with model Shaneen. These were taken back in August and these are a few of my favorites please let me know what you think about them. This was really my first studio type shoot like this. Straight out of the camera just converted from raw.







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Old 11-19-2005, 09:51 AM   #2 (permalink)
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First of all...love the model. She is a lovely young lady...

Here are my thoughts

#1 - Not liking the pose. This angle makes her left leg look much thinner than I'm sure it is. Also the stairs below and left really take away from the image IMO. The lighting also accentuates her collar bone which is not flattering to her..

#2 - This one has promise. A little tweak here or there in post and you may have something here. I took the liberty and made a slight levels and curves adjustment just to show a contrast to the image you posted. It may not fit your taste but I think it added a little pop to the image

#3 - Looks to much like a snapshot...I would like to see the rug removed and a different posing of the left leg. The angle of her foot LOOKS uncomfortable.

I would DEFINITELY work with this beauty again and again...

Keep shooting....

Here is the image I played with...as soon as you reply I will remove it...


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Bobby,

Thanks for your opinions and I do like the way the one you played with came out, you said you just did a little adjustments to the levels and the curves?

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Levels and curves to the eyes and face...and slight diffused glow to the parka...I did add a skin softner to her to even it out a bit...all in all about 2 minutes in PS
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