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I can resist it!!!! Just one more for today!!!
Old 11-17-2005, 08:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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All comments, as always welcome!!!

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Re: I can resist it!!!! Just one more for today!!!
Old 11-17-2005, 10:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Needs to be cropped a bit higher, lighting is flat, her legs are blown out, there is something red in his jean pocket, and it's just out of focus. All that said, I love the composition and originality. Honestly, the best picture I have seen on GG today.


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Re: I can resist it!!!! Just one more for today!!!
Old 11-18-2005, 12:18 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks a lot for your input and kind comments sir!!!!

Light is as flat as it can be because i just own my camera (equipment is a little bit expensive this side of the border) but I'll try to work a little bit more on photoshop just to see how it works on this image.

I'll post the original (uncropped) version of the pic so you can tell me please which could be a nice crop.

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Re: I can resist it!!!! Just one more for today!!!
Old 11-18-2005, 11:34 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I think you need to make sure your focal point is the eyes. The hair on his arm is sharp but the eyes are starting to fade. Other than that it would go with the other image that you posted. The bar and the bottle. Either before or after. Story board type of pictures.

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