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Old 11-17-2005, 12:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Tell me what you guys think of this. It is a little intimidating posting after lurking around here but here I go. This is my forst official post. This shot was done with horrible conditions. Wind was blowing into the sun and I did not have anyone to help with reflectors.

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Old 11-17-2005, 01:22 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice job. Really the only thing I would change is crop it closer. Too much sky
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Old 11-17-2005, 07:28 AM   #3 (permalink)
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considering the conditions this image came out really well and the ps work is great also, good job.
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Old 11-17-2005, 08:35 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I think it is pretty good as well. Tighter cropping as said above -- and maybe rotate it a little to the right.
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Old 11-17-2005, 09:52 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Selective coloring draws your attention to the colored portion, which should be your intended point of interest. In this case, the yellow cloth is distracting, as it draws my attention away from the model.
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Old 11-17-2005, 12:23 PM   #6 (permalink)
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One suggestion would be to turn the model more to you and have her look in the direction of the sun by turning her head and yet hold the fabric so the wind still compositions the fabric well. It would give the image some depth and still have feeling and form I think.
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Old 11-17-2005, 02:10 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I think a larger crop would have been better. Try this: Make the canvas 10x12 and tie the image to the lower right corner. Select the left side of the image from the figure to the left edge and stretch to fill the canvas. Select the upper part of the image from the top of the figure and stretch to fill the canvas. Desaturate the yellow and call it "Defiance".
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Old 11-17-2005, 11:11 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Original work...it works for me. You are the artist and if you want it that way that is fine. I am sure you have many other shots in this series with different angles and crops.

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