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Old 11-16-2005, 08:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I know I dont post very often but I really try to do my best.

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Old 11-16-2005, 11:24 PM   #2 (permalink)
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My pick is No. 3. You can use Photoshop to work on these (delete unnecessary minor details).

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Old 11-17-2005, 12:53 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the input, im currently in post production (correcting color and all that stuff) I'll try to post more from these series.

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Old 11-17-2005, 06:20 AM   #4 (permalink)
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The third is my favorite too.
What did you use in # 2 for the blurring around the model's face ?
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Old 11-17-2005, 07:34 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I think that #1 is my fav the only issue I have with it is the models expression. But the pose, exposure and crop all work well.
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Old 11-17-2005, 09:27 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Andromeda plug in for photoshop more specifically Varifocus
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Old 11-17-2005, 12:36 PM   #7 (permalink)
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You should post more often. Very pretty subjects.

Image 1. Excellent however watch the growing fingers out of the breast. A slight pose adjustment would keep the theme and pose going and yet not have the fingers growing out like that.

Image 2. Not sure what you are thinking here. Image looks blurred for a dof effect and not dof. Like to see stronger make up on the model.

Image 3. She's glued to the wall. Love the head shot and intense look. Try opening up this image with curves and levels and give it some punch. Crop tighter and eliminate the holding up the wall syndrome.

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Old 11-17-2005, 02:47 PM   #8 (permalink)
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You should post more often. Very pretty subjects.

Image 1. Excellent however watch the growing fingers out of the breast. A slight pose adjustment would keep the theme and pose going and yet not have the fingers growing out like that.

Image 2. Not sure what you are thinking here. Image looks blurred for a dof effect and not dof. Like to see stronger make up on the model.

Image 3. She's glued to the wall. Love the head shot and intense look. Try opening up this image with curves and levels and give it some punch. Crop tighter and eliminate the holding up the wall syndrome.



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Thanks a lot for your comments! The girls Im working with seem to have some affair with the wall (hehehehe) I dont have a lot of experience working with models so I tend to let them pop out poses and just be themselves. Please feel free to make any adjustment to the third image so I can see an example of what you have in mind for the image.

Anyway thanks a lot I really appreciate comments from guys I admire!
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Old 11-17-2005, 03:05 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Just a quick example of how I would have opened up the levels and gave more contrast. I worked off your image posted so we lost some quality in the edit by not working on the original but I think you can get the idea by comparing the two on how your original one is muddy and how just by a simple tonal adjustment we can create some spark.

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Old 11-17-2005, 04:01 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Thanks a lot now i get the full pic! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

Im in the process of changins some levels to the images i took from this session, still have to practice a lot and since I don't own any light equipment nor modifiers (reflectors, bouncers etc) sometimes its a little bit hard to get the desired effects.
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