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Old 11-15-2005, 04:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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These are from Sky's first photo shoot. The lighting is natural morning sunlight coming in across the lake. Sky is wearing little or no makeup. We would like your opinion on the photos, and any suggestions to improve the results from any future shoots.
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The lighting is very even; probably too even. You might consider a gold reflector to add some warmth and contrast. With the exception of #1, the other horizontal shots are more suited to being verticals; there's just too much dead space there, and I'd like to see more of the model. And finally, keep an eye on her hair in #2-3.

She's a pretty girl, and I bet if you coach her to vary her expression a bit she'd do very well. A hit of a smile would be nice.

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You seem to be more inclined to horizontal format than vertical. Glamour, fashion, portrait and fine art nudes are most likely to be vertical. You have a great deal of wasted space in the horizontals other than the first one. It is probably best although the bare breatsed one that is vertical is very good. Her expressions in these are very much like a young (attractive) woman who is sharing her body in the outdoors with her lover, that is cool and to me adds to the images. Again, work on verticals and definitely work with this young lady again.



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