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Old 11-06-2005, 02:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi Guys

I've been lurking here most days for the last few months, I've been taking photo's for a while and finally got a pair of used photolight's to start playing with.

Attached is my first effort in colour and black and white. This is Jenny, my 17 yr old sister in law, also her first time. Taken with one flash with a soft box direct to camera right, a second light with a brolly about six feet to the left and a 40" reflector at 45 deg diretly in front of her.

I also find it amazing that most of you can quote Monty Python!!!

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

P.S. I've not seen much of Don for a while, I always enjoy his critiques, if he would like to give me his input by PM that would be great.

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Old 11-06-2005, 02:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice photo

Suggestion - raise your main light up higher so that the catchlight in the eyes is closer to the top and this will cause the shadow off the nose to go down towards the lips more and give you more modeling to the face. IMHO

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Old 11-06-2005, 04:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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cheers morgan, Never would have thought of that, but thats why I'm here!!

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Nice!
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