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Old 10-26-2005, 10:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I'd like to include this in my web: however,
I'm feeling something is missing.
Any ideas?

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Old 10-26-2005, 11:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The first thing that strikes me is that your right leg looks amputated. It also doesn't appear to be proportional to the rest of your body. The only other thing that I'd like to see is more tonal separation between your hair and the background. Overall it's a good image, but the right leg is a deal-breaker for me.



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Old 10-27-2005, 02:37 AM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks
I agree that was the problem
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Old 10-27-2005, 12:20 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I'd like to include this in my web: however,
I'm feeling something is missing.
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Wish you had left it up longer so I could have seen it..

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Old 10-27-2005, 12:34 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I'll put it back up for you to
review.
Thanks
It got mixed reviews that I agree with
so thanks again
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Old 10-27-2005, 12:42 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Gem,

Thanks, you didnt HAVE to put it back up. But I do appreciate the opportunity to look at it.

I agree with the fact that your hair blends into the background and should be more visible.. and I like that it shows you with longer hair. I would personally have also brushed the hair off the shoulder.

However, I like the pose and the overal look you have in this image. I also happen to think that for this image the slightly dark quality of the image gives it that "dark, erotic look", and if I might guess.. that is what you were going for.

I am no EXPERT, but I happen to like this image.

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Old 10-27-2005, 07:37 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I added a new one
I think this one carries thew feeling.
What do you think?
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Old 10-27-2005, 07:38 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I added a new one
What do you think?
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Old 10-27-2005, 10:02 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I added a new one
I think this one carries thew feeling.
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I think I like it. Dark yet sensuous. I would actually even like to see how it looked in color.. but I do like this B&W.. maybe just a little bit lighter would have worked better.

You have some great images that you have shown us so far...

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Old 10-27-2005, 10:18 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Thanks
Can I ask a photogragher to colorize this?

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