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Old 10-22-2005, 11:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Does this do the job to get erotic thoughts across?
What woukd you change?




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Old 10-23-2005, 12:13 AM   #2 (permalink)
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your picture is so small like a thumbnails... [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img]
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Old 10-23-2005, 12:22 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi Gem,
If you are typing the url to your GG pics http://www.garageglamour.com/portfol...m/th-15e53.jpg
then you need to leave out (th-)
When you post from your GG portfolio, don't click on IMAGE, click PORTFOLIO, then just click the pic you want. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Re: erotic?
Old 10-23-2005, 12:38 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Is this better?
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Old 10-23-2005, 12:39 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I just learned to use portfolio
Is this better?
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Old 10-23-2005, 06:34 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Hi.

Based on the larger images in your reply to others, here are my thoughts.

Nice image, but if it were mine I would like to make some minor changes to the pose.

To me, the thingees, wotsits, or whatever they are that are attached to your nipples, suggest a bondage theme. The question then becomes.... Sub or Dom?
The pose however says "coy" (in my opinion).

If I were looking for a submissive image I think you should lower your shoulders,.... turn your face more downward,.... and just lift your gaze to barely meet the viewer's gaze.
For a Dominant image I would suggest a more agressive stance,... legs apart slightly,... head up,... defiant stare to camera.

Using your hands to cover your nakedness can still work in either style. In the submissive style the pose should say ... "Please Don't" ..., whereas in the dominant style it should be an emphatic ... "No you can't" .....

Just my personal viewpoint of course, and many others will see things differently

Now that you have figured out how to post your images I look forward to seeing more. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img]

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Re: erotic?
Old 10-23-2005, 07:35 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Thanks for input
Here is another one from the shoot
What do you think?
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Old 10-23-2005, 01:00 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Well, the coy look has gone, and it gets closer to the dominant side, but the lighting is not as effective in this shot, and overall in my opinion, it's just not quite there. Those nipple thingees are great accessories for a shoot, but I think some more styling work is needed to go with the mood. .... And the lighting mood needs to be right too.

I took a look at your portfolio, and there is some great stuff in there.

I love the "Those Chains" image! And you certainly achieve "erotic" in many of the other images.

For me, the 2 images you posted here are nice images but don't quite have that extra something. Sorry, but it's just my personal opinion of course.
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Old 10-23-2005, 01:33 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Thanks
I agree and have other things in my portfolio like the
chain mail.
I just liked the nipple shields and can see working with
my photogragher, being more explicit with the erotic idea
I'll add some more erotic photos next week.
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Old 10-29-2005, 02:35 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Thanks for yout help
I'm now getting more stuff together


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