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Old 10-16-2005, 09:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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did I get the background ok?
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Old 10-16-2005, 11:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Background is just fine. I'm not sure that the subject doesn't need a bit of contrast adjustment and a bit more saturation, though.



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Old 10-17-2005, 10:22 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Good work! A bit more light on the front and have her bend her right elbow naturally, rather than hyperextended and you'll have an outstanding shot.

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I have to remind April to keep her elbow natural, she like to bend it backwards, too.

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Old 10-17-2005, 12:22 PM   #4 (permalink)
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The backround looks fine, but her arm looks weird. Very pretty model too. But she has no pop. The image looks a little flat.
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Old 10-19-2005, 12:59 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks for the input, and after seeing your portfolio I understand what you mean about "no pop" as yours definately does. I think I need to maybe add a little saturation as well as working on the lighting a bit more to add some depth.

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