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Old 10-14-2005, 10:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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First shoot with a 1st time model.
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Old 10-14-2005, 11:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the pose and the model is attractive what catches my eye are the wrinkles in back drop/floor and the belt loops on the bottoms. just my opinions I am a newbie too. also notice the shadow on right eye.

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Old 10-14-2005, 11:27 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments Brew and couldn't agree more, I personally hated that bottom! The wrinkles are totally my fault should have used some burn and gotten rid of the things since I never seem to be able to get them out on the ground.

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I like the pose, and I think Brew covered everything. One suggestion is to buy pieces of cloth that have interesting reflective or transparent features and spread them on the ground. In the case, the wrinkles would be more natural and smooth, rather than the harder creases and wrinkles in the muslin. Also, pulling her out from the backdrop would help seperate her from the drop and aslo the light fallof would help the backdrop go black.

Hope I'm making sense, I'm on my first cup o' Jo.

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