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Old 10-13-2005, 07:39 PM   #1 (permalink)
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What is right and what is wrong with this photo????



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Old 10-13-2005, 08:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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OK,

She looks a little bit out of focus but that could be due to downsizing. She looks like she is sitting on nothing which makes it look odd IMHO. The pose looks a bit odd with the legs. And I am not sure about the background, since I do not know what it is suppose to represent.

The lighting looks ok though I would like to see some catch lights to make her eyes sparkle.

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Old 10-13-2005, 08:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the input. She is sitting on a couch that is shaped like two hands side by side, she is in the palms of the hands. My lens gave out just after or just before this shot I am not sure when but I tipped my camera to do a little chimping and there was a funny noise (chink) oh.. no... That may be why it is out of focus I am not real sure either. I like the pose and I do tend to have problems with the eyes ... grrrr. How about the back light on this is it too much?

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Old 10-13-2005, 08:33 PM   #4 (permalink)
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The back lighting looks ok.

Not sure how you had the main light but you might need to lower it a bit to get the catch light in the eyes.
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Old 10-13-2005, 11:12 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I've never been a fan of crotch or near crotch shots I think it would have been better if you had rolled the right knee over to cover the area and perhaps turned the right foot out to give the leg better tone and extend the apparent length.
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Old 10-14-2005, 06:52 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks for your input as well cclesue,

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