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Old 10-13-2005, 01:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Please take a look and critique,
Old 10-13-2005, 01:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like these..sept two things that could better...the lighting position is good..but seems a bit Hot maybe half a stop..and the foot is buggin me in the image...you might try PSing out that foot and leg.
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Old 10-13-2005, 01:52 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree with Don
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Old 10-13-2005, 02:45 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I concur with everybody else. Lose the foot in #1. Also fix the dark patches under her eyes in #3.

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Re: Please take a look and critique,
Old 10-13-2005, 04:06 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I like the middle one best. Like everyone else, the legs look awkward (that cant be spelled right). That kind of shot might be difficult to compose. My reference pic suffers from the same short coming.

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Old 10-13-2005, 04:46 PM   #6 (permalink)
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All three seem to have a little problem with sharpness in the eyes. I'm not sure if that is compression for web or focus, but they just seem soft.

The lighting on the face is nice in all of them.

#1 As everyone has said the leg coming out of her shoulder is disturbing. The whole pose was confusing to me until I saw #2 and figured out what she was wearing. You do use the whole frame, which segues into...
#2 There's a big open spot that drags my eye in the upper left. And the foot is still a problem.
#3 This is the best of the bunch. Nice light, her beautiful face is the center of the image and there is some nice drop off below and behind. Maybe a shade dark in the shadow.

Hope that helps.
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Old 10-13-2005, 05:20 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Ditto on what the guys all said. There looks like a tat on her shoulder that is trying to get out into the light. I'd PS that out.
I looked at them on two monitors Good work, but this business of pictures looking different on different monitors and systems is driving me nuts.
I think if it looks good when ya print it that should make you happy.
The way it looks on the net ya may just have to take your chances of not everybody liking it.
again I like what I saw for what its worth!
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Old 10-13-2005, 11:11 PM   #8 (permalink)
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thanks, for all the replys, As for sharpness, i think it may be the web or my website. They are sharp in my prints. As being new to Photoshop CS, I have had a basic class in the software. I will work on the retouching and the legs in the poses. My last post looked flat so i gather this time, they are not flat or as flat. Thanks Don for the lighting suggestions on my last critique.

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