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Old 10-12-2005, 10:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here are my new bike shots. Tell me what you think!
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Re: New Bike Shots
Old 10-13-2005, 05:02 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the 6th one down. I's almost as much about you the model as it is about the bike. Most of the other ones seem to be all about the bike with the model as a decoration. KnowwhatImean?

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Old 10-13-2005, 07:50 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice bike and cute girl. My biggest suggestion would be more light on the subjects, there are some hard shadows on her face and her hair disappears into the background. It'd also bring out the chrome and paint on the bikes. I'd also move them farther away from the backdrop, providing more light on them and hopefully the light will fall off leaving the backdrop black rather than dark grey.



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Old 10-13-2005, 08:23 AM   #4 (permalink)
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More light!
Great poses.
Nice setup.
but way too flat and dark.
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Old 10-13-2005, 08:37 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Well they were all for advertising the bikes, not me, so I guess I did good for the bikes then? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img]
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Old 10-18-2005, 01:57 AM   #6 (permalink)
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think you need to adjust the levels or use curves in Pshop and make the images snap. cause the lighting was exposure was low them...
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