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Old 10-12-2005, 08:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I was travelling through Chicago and had the opportunity to work with an up and coming model. I was travelling light and didn't have a meter or any decent lights. I used the on camera flash and a little $19 slave. This one was shot early on before I had everything narrowed in. I keep coming back to this image.
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Old 10-12-2005, 08:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I think maybe with some color balance adjustments and maybe abit with levels and contrast you might have something here....the color seems a bit Magenta

or maybe even try converting B&W and pop the contrast.

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Old 10-12-2005, 08:36 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The pose is too cool and the expresion is a winner. The cheap lighting really ads an unexpected look to the photo. I think it's a winner!

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Old 10-12-2005, 09:11 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks for the feedback. In some ways I was dissapointed with the shot because I was out of my element. I guess nothing ventured nothing gained. Here is one that I did apply a gradiant map to achieve a higher contract B&W.

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i meant CONTRAST
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It has a nice snapshot quality to it, but does have a distinct color cast as already mentioned. Crop about 1/5th off the right side and it will be a better composition.



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DOH!!! I LIKE IT ALOT!!!!!
Cool stuff!!!!



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Old 10-12-2005, 09:22 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks again for the support. I think this model has a great future. I wish I could have done a better job for her, but I was 2000 miles from my equipment and dealing with crowds of on lookers. Anyway, We did get a few good ones.



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