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Old 10-11-2005, 10:09 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My first post. Feedback please. I had to shoot in a small room (10x10) so I used a 17-35mm lens. Not the best way to shoot a model.

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Re: First image post: Terrace
Old 10-12-2005, 12:48 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I find the border-within-the-border distracting to the point that it interferes with my ability to evaluate the image. About all I can say about it the way it is now is that I think I like the composition. One problem I think I see is that her face is distorted (bigger and out of proportion to the rest of her body), probably due to the your lens selection. Try posting again without the framing.



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Re: First image post: Terrace
Old 10-12-2005, 09:34 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi Joshua,
I agree with Chip about the border. Better to keep it simple I think.
She looks a very attractive model, but the distortion caused by the wide angle lens is not at all flattering. I have also worked in very limited spaces and I think it is better to concentrate on headshots, or half-length. Also you could take a look at some of David Moyle's body parts shots for some inspiration.

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Re: First image post: Terrace
Old 10-12-2005, 11:56 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice image. I like it.
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Re: First image post: Terrace
Old 10-12-2005, 03:04 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Great image, the limitations are only in your mind. let go of that and you will continue to produce similarly exciting photographs. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

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Old 10-12-2005, 06:14 PM   #6 (permalink)
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thank you much
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Ha! I put the border on b/c she asked me too. (saw it on another image) Thank you for your input.
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