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Old 10-07-2005, 01:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Just wanted to post for critique. I've been working on a few things. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img]

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I guess I'm missing something, but I don't know what the "kisses" has to do with this photo.

I think the highlighted area behind the head is distracting since its not clear why its there. It also looks like there's some sort of a blemish or flaw between the eyebrow and the eye. If this is some sort of piercing, then it doesn't work with this kind of shot because one doesn't know if its a problem with the photo or real life. I also feel that the arm is awkwardly posed.



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RFS I saw what you ment in the eye area I didn't notice that before. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img]
I'll keep working on the other stuff.

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