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Old 10-04-2005, 07:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Comments welcomed. Thanks, JK

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Re: First time critique request
Old 10-04-2005, 09:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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A good portrait and good color sepration between her and the background. The only thing that I see to really help improve on this would be to use the "bandaid tool" in photoshop to remove the small blemishes on her forehead.



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Old 10-04-2005, 09:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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nice portrait. i like that you've separated her from the BG with the backlighting. i too think might "clean up" her forehead a bit. i'd also like to see you reduce your DOF and get that BG softer focus-wise.

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She's a pretty girl and that's a great expression. I'll echo the Jims.
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