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Old 10-04-2005, 12:08 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Newbie at this, looking for help, trying to get the lighting and posing right. First post images weren't displayed so here is my second try at it.








Thanks for any help

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Old 10-04-2005, 05:15 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Your Lighting seems very flat....void of shadow..I think as a newbie its a mistake we all make...I know I did...I was more worried about the LIGHT..instead of the shadows...start out with one light...set it just one side or other of the camera and about a foot above the models head...then move it around on an imaginary half circle keeping it the same distance from the model and watch the shadows as they move when you move the light..your exposure looks good.....but just flat....the image below was shot with one light and a reflector on the model....start thinking shadow and it will add some drama and depth to your images...

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Thanks Don,
I will give that a try

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You're quite welcome...its nice to see a someone come along like you are...been there done that..and really enjoyed learning even thru all the tuff critiques and bruised egos I had...so hang in there and keep shooting and posting.....if you need some tips..just pm me...I'll try to help.

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