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Old 10-02-2005, 06:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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As usual, all comments are welcome!!!!
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Re: Another attempt
Old 10-02-2005, 07:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Cool picture. Did you soften the picture intentionaly?


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Close, but no cookie for you...
Old 10-02-2005, 11:02 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Man, you are so close... but I think you missed the eye problem.

Her left eye iris is tucked in the corner of her eye socket, while her right eye iris is sorta out there in full view. Makes them look like they're different sizes. Even a slight turn of her head would have fixed it. Kind of disconcerting to me... Maybe others can live with it.

She's very lovely, and you've got some nice color going for you. I'm not sure what all the softness is about just yet. Maybe the original looked a bit hard... but if it's PS, I'd back up and do it again with a little less next time.

And while you are about that, consider cropping some off the bottom. There's that funny little dark spot in the lower right corner, and her arm looks weird cropped at the wrist. I'd take the crop up above the horizontal part of her arm. That is, to about her elbow.

Oh, and those few stray hairs at the back of her head could be cleaned up...

And that's what I see in the image...





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Re: Another attempt
Old 10-02-2005, 11:26 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I usually like to work with bright lights, in fact its a little bit photoshopped but not a lot.

Great you liked it! Thanks

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