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shot this evening
Old 09-28-2005, 10:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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please all comments welcome on this hot model

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Re: shot this evening
Old 09-28-2005, 11:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice shot. I like the pose, cropping and the overall lighting and effect. They eyes seem a little soft, however. What was your focus point?



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Re: shot this evening
Old 09-29-2005, 07:00 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice image Gary.

Does this model have an on-line portfolio anywhere?

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Old 10-03-2005, 05:03 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hey Gary,

I think the model is beautifull. I think the lighting is good...except for the little hot spot (which doesnt mother me so much), You had the start of a beautifull pose with a nice s curve to the body...but honestly...whats with the hand just "dangling" over her head. That really distracts me. It is very "out of place" with the rest of the pose. Just my .02
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Nice shot... Lovely girl...
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The image has a lot going for it.

She's very beautiful, you've got lots of light, and a pose that shows her figure off.

I would have preferred a less flat light. This looks a bit too much like overpowering flash.

About the only thing I'd change now is the clutter on the left side of the pole, especially that white thingy... clone black in there over the white thingy, then do a selection on the left side of the pole and blur it out a bit more. I'd also set clone opacity at about 20% and knock down the highlight on the pole in the area near her face. I think you would improve the image.

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