I like this one much better. I still feel the shadows, on her legs and face a little to heavy, a reflector bouncing some light in would have lightened them up.
The overall feel of this one is better also. Although I feel the shoe in her right hand should be rotated so we see the the top instead of the bottom. And her left leg seems like she rotated it to much, it would be nice to see the side of that shoe, with her leg in a more natural postion with her foot rotated from the ankle to point hte shoe towards camera.
Just my two cents