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Old 09-20-2005, 07:46 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Any sugggestions, critiques....

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Re: Ann
Old 09-20-2005, 08:13 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Well it looks great to me! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] I'm guessing you were going for a fashion image here? I just don't see it as glamour. What were you going for with this one?

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Old 09-20-2005, 01:33 PM   #3 (permalink)
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yes it's an fashion shoot - made for a stylist
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Old 09-20-2005, 05:38 PM   #4 (permalink)
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i really like this image. beautiful model, great pose (tho i might have let her left arm reveal all the way to her hand), cool location, and i like the side highlight. i might recommend you downsize image to 400x600 so most people can see the entire image on their screens without scrolling. the image you posted is 533px X 800px
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Re: Ann
Old 09-20-2005, 07:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I'm loving the location and background, the lighting....just a tad too harsh for me, but overall a good image
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Old 09-20-2005, 09:19 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I like it - and love the location it is awesome. One little issue for me was the shadow on her forehead and the size of the shadow from her nose. The lighting may have been perfect but I think my issue would have been solved by having her point her nose just a little more to her right and reducing these shadows. IF you have others from this sitting check them out to see if there si one that illustrates this concept.

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Old 09-21-2005, 01:42 PM   #7 (permalink)
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You should have shown more of the foot without the shoe. It is not completely clear that she's holding the other shoe of the same pair she has on, or if she's holding another shoe. For a fashion shot that must be inmediately clear.
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Old 09-21-2005, 11:00 PM   #8 (permalink)
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First I agree with that the hard shadow needs to be reduced, and yes the bare foot needs to out from behind the leg, but the thing that I don't like the most is the left arm is across across the body and seems akward to me. Maybe a slightly different pose hmmm

The location does look like it has lots of potential.
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