It wouldn't be going in my round file!
The only thing that bothers me on it is the position of her right foot. With the shadows around it, it appears to be at a strange angle.
Personally, I would crop it tighter. Probably at mid thigh but retaining the proportions of the frame. I think the positioning of the highlights combined with the way her arms and hands are placed, creates a strong dynamic diagonal running from top left to bottom right. If I just mask the screen with a couple of pieces of card its looking really good to me.
No, this would definitely not be going in my round file. We must be setting ourselves different standards.
Rule 10 picture is Alyson Davies