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Old 09-18-2005, 03:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here's an image I shot last week. Please give me any and all suggestions and critiques...



and if you have anything nice to say to this new model please chime in...

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Old 09-18-2005, 04:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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mmmm could use a bit of seperation from the background perhaps a hairlight..or lighting the background...the shoulder position seems a bit tense....try turning her shoulders a bit more...she has beautiful eyes...and full lips...and shes a red head to boot!!! Keep shooting and posting!!

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Lighten it up and add a little contrastand you get the seperation from the bakground and her hair and other highlights start to stand out. The shot works fine but do a little post processing to enhance or bring out the finer qualities which are in this photo what you have.
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Old 09-18-2005, 10:13 PM   #4 (permalink)
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It's a great image! The only things I think could use some work are the catch lights. It looks like you've got a gold reflector down low, but the reflection of that is distracting.

That's a very small point, though. I really like the image!
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Please PS the double catchlight in her eyes. Thanks!
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Thank you guys for the tips.. the next shoot i plan on getting some rim/hair lighting going on.. I'm working in a very tight space so it's hard to get the distance between the model and backdrop to get good separation through lighting the background. And I don't have the highest of ceilings for a good hair light.

As for the catchlights, that was something the model and I both liked.. is it that the catchlights are too intense or is it something else.

Thanks again.

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