Post in the Photo Critique forum and no comments? You shouldn't be allowed to get away with that! ...... So I'm going back to look at that post again too. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
Two very nice photographs of a very pretty lady.
Since you posted for critique though.
Picture 1: well you already mentioned the arm. I think her hair disappears into the black background a little and I would have liked a little hairlight to pick it out. Also her right arm looks very thin somehow, but I'm not sure why. Maybe losing part of her arm in shadow.
Picture 2: Uuum..... I like it. What can I say.
Oh! Found one! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] I would like to see a little more of her left arm around this side of her body. Her sleeve looks a little empty and her hand a little bit disembodied.
I think you would have to be careful with that though, because the S shape of her body in that pose is lovely and you wouldn't want to lose any of that effect.
Well, do you prefer not
getting any comments now?
Rule 10 picture (Model: Alyson Davies)