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Got to shoot this evening. (and pic for David Moyle)
Old 09-14-2005, 02:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I moved 600 miles since my last shoot, so this is my first in the new town. I got some new toys and had a ton of fun putting them to use.

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Re: Got to shoot this evening. (and pic for David Moyle)
Old 09-17-2005, 06:21 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Okay. I read your next post and as promised here I am back at your previous post. (If that makes any sense.)

Picture 1 is pretty hard to find fault with. On my monitor her eyes look a little soft to me (of course that could be the monitor or my eyesight!). If it were mine I might be tempted to crop it just a little higher at the bottom. Just below her left hand, cropping out some of her knee.
I wish it were one of mine!

Picture 2: I think the dress draped over her left knee gives a strange illusion when used with the black background as well. Also her right leg is resting quite heavily on that knee and would look better in my opinion if she was only resting it very lightly so that the depression in her right calf was reduced. I'm not really a fan of this type of shot in general though. (Sorry David!)

Oooooh! I just noticed something else.

Is that a riding crop she's holding?
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I got some new toys and had a ton of fun putting them to use.

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Is that one of your new toys James? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/blush.gif[/img]

A ton of fun???? So where's the rest of the pictures from this session? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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Re: Got to shoot this evening. (and pic for David Moyle)
Old 09-17-2005, 08:19 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the first shot and I am not a fan of a black dress in front of a FLAT black background but it works suprisingly well were since the dress is open the length of her side, and her eyes make up for anything [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]. The second shot the reason I am not a fan of black on black is more clear - (the lack of seperation form the background) the dress coverng the leg leaves a distorted and I think unattractive limb, while it flattens her chest and leaves no known waiste, which leaves an illusion (for me) she is larger than she is. This would flatter a pregnant woman but this girls is left looking stalkier than she realy is.

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