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Another new one From last night.
Old 09-09-2005, 02:58 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Another new one From last night.
Old 09-09-2005, 05:31 AM   #2 (permalink)
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i think its on the verge of being TOO hot in the face, but i like the way it creates a contast. good work
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Re: Another new one From last night.
Old 09-09-2005, 07:14 AM   #3 (permalink)
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A lovely lady. I like the lighting on her face and the overall mood it creates, but she seems to be leaning forward and I think I would have preferred her to lift her head a little. Also a hairlight might just lift her from the background a bit more and fill in the shadow on her right shoulder. It seems to be giving a strange shape to her shoulder and making her neck look unnaturally thin.

Nice shot though!

Here's my rule 10 picture.(I wish I had got her to lift her head a little too. Doh!)

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Re: Another new one From last night.
Old 09-09-2005, 10:46 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hi I am a new model just getting started my name is kim, I think that models expression is not very good and she needs to do somthing diffrent with her hair, she is a pretty model dont get me wrong but i think she needs to have better expression in her face and her hair is not good.
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Re: Another new one From last night.
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I think the lighting is a little off as there are distinct hot spots on the face which makes for an uneven lighting look that along with the expression takes away from the photo, in my view. Probably would also be better with some background seperation. I like the pose and cropping, however.



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Re: Another new one From last night.
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The pose looks good to me. I have to agree that the expression isnt really working for me. A hair light above and behind would be a big help here and the main lighting is a bit like horror movie lighting to me. The highlights have been mentioned but there is also a strange dark area above her right eyebrow that bothers me.

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Re: Another new one From last night.
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"a strange dark area above her right eyebrow that bothers me" now that you mention it - it bothers me too [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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