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Old 09-06-2005, 11:40 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 09-06-2005, 03:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Gary,

Nice chopper and beautiful model. Good colors, contrast, focus and lighting. Technically, this is a fine image and I'm sure she loves it.

I have never been a big fan of shots of ladies in a bathing suit standing or sitting with a motorcycle wearing high heels. She looks like someone placed her there. I guess this is what I have said in prior posts...there should be some connection of the model with the prop/location.

My suggestion, if you really want to shoot with the swimsuit, get a close shot of her that gives the viewer the impression she is riding it. Or better, shoot her holding onto the handle bars with a colorful leather riding outfit.

Your model has outstanding hair and a nice figure. Let's see what others think.

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Old 09-06-2005, 06:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I disagree with Bonner. When's the last time we saw a model riding a chopper in Easyrider? If you want to make it look like she's a rider, fine, style it that way. There's no reason she has to look like she's riding or a rider for an image to work of a model with a bike. I'm assuming this is about eye candy.

Now, on toy our eye candy styling. The suit is a little out of place. It's too beachy. You've got this killer iron steed in the middle of all that grass and this beach bikini. Try to get something a little more in keeping with the overall feel. Some cute little Daisy Dukes, or a black bikini would work.

I'm also not a fan of having her arm disappear into the handlebars. Move her hand down the tank. She'll have to lean forward to do it, but that gives a really good opportunity for nice arch in the back.

Be careful not to get in the chrome. I'm having a hard time making out what's in the reflection in the air cleaner cover. Maybe it's a bush, or you. Don't let it be you. Use a long lens and get as far away as you can.

Other than that it's a nice shot.

BTW, plenty of girls do ride in heels and bikinis, or less




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Old 09-07-2005, 03:51 AM   #4 (permalink)
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great shot. my only complaint is that the bathing suit clashes too much with the bike. maybe a dark suit, or white. all imho

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Old 09-07-2005, 09:02 AM   #5 (permalink)
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It might work as part of a series, but the way you cut the bike makes takes away a lot of the value of the picture as a stand alone
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