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Old 09-04-2005, 01:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 09-04-2005, 02:10 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The model is beautiful the poses are good in general but I think each image needs some color balancing and greater contrast. The foreground bed posts bother me and the backgrounds is just too out of focus for my tastes. Your logo is too large and distracts for the quality of work, unless it is that big to try to cover up the bed posts. We all have different tastes so don't take these comments to heart - I do like the photos with thee exceptions.

If I asked for critiques or even critique this image myself, there would be lots to say, but i like it.





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Individually, Mark, each of these images carries its own weight (though the middle image is probably the weakest of all three - it SEEMS to be less sharp and the obvious Photoshopping detracts from the overall image, IMHO). #1 could use a bit less headroom, but I really like her expressions in #1 and #3.. looks like she's really having fun with the shoot.

But, when looked at as a series, there are some issues that become more apparent. As Gus indicated, color balance among the three should be closer to each other, since it appears that they were all taken in the same location and under what looks to be similar lighting conditions. Also, I'd expect the skin tones to be similar, as well, and they're not. That's distracting, when you view the three images as a series... less so when you look at each individual image.

As far as the logo goes.. I'd suggest you find one you like and stick with it. The different style, and the one image without a logo, distracts because it's something that's so obvious. FWIW, I'd go with one that asserts your copyright, but your mileage may vary from my tastes.

All in all... nice images individually, but ya gotta work on that consistency when viewing the three as a series.


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