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Old 09-02-2005, 10:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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all comments welcome. looking for improvement. shot with 20d

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You picked a great model a geat bike and the right time of day, and the image is interesting and well taken. I would have set the focal length on the camera camera or used a different lense in order to shorten reduce the focus on the background. So the tree growing out of her head might not be so pronounced.

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Old 09-02-2005, 11:45 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree on the DOF....but I might add...there are several hot reflections coming off the bike that detract from the model and a hotspot on her hip..
too many hot spots to make this a keeper image.
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What bike? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img] Oh, that one.

I think it's a great shot. Did you get any more positions with you model like twisting a little with her left hand on the seat?

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Old 09-03-2005, 01:12 PM   #5 (permalink)
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The girl's hot and the bike's kicka$$, that's for sure. However, there are lots of things that are wrong with this image, or taht you could do differently in my opinion to make it better. Here goes:

What's that a camo bikini? Pick a bikini that goes with the bike
I don't so much mind the hot spot on her hip or the reflections. However, using a polarizing filter would have really hepled cut down on them.
Bikes always photograph better on the pipe side. This would be a much better image if you had come around to the pipe side, kept her standing, put her left hand on the clutch grip, and her right hand down on her bikini bottom.
A little more shallow DOF would have been appropriate in this image If you're using a point and shoot you have very little control over that. If you're using an SLR, get it out of portrait mode and shoot on manual.
She looks like she's working to stay in her pose. Wrong answer. She should look relaxed and sexy. The viewer needs to think that if he had this bike, he could bag her.

This is just another picture of a pretty girl and a rad bike. Go forth and create a killer shot. I look forward to your next efforts.

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Cool Image Mike!!

Think I could bag her? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
probably not...DeAnn would have my sack on a pole!!

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