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Amateur...Please cirtique my photo
Old 08-30-2005, 08:18 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Any and all comments and recommendations would be appreciated.

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Re: Amateur...Please cirtique my photo
Old 08-31-2005, 04:58 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Very pretty model. The image is not bad, but there are a few points I can make. The face seems kind of soft, but I think it may be some jpeq artifacts from the compression. The position of her left leg really detracts from the photo. The background is kind of buisy. I've been forced to use similar bacgrounds myself, but if you have room to bring her closer to the end of the bed and user a wider aperature you can throw the background out of focus.
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Re: Amateur...Please cirtique my photo
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Thanks for the input. The original image does look better. Plus I photoshoped the image from color to B&W.

Thanks again for the recommendations.
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Never frame the subject cutting limbs at the joints (meaning the ankle on the leg closest to the frame). That mistake takes the photo to the level of a snap shot meaning a "grab shot" and not a "designed shot".
Photographers even wehn wanting a snapshot look must be in full control of the elements in the photo. One must be very careful of composition specially when using flash on camera which adds to the snapshot quality of any image.
Beautiful model, wonderful idea. It has the quality of 'bragging rights' photo. The conversation at the poker table with your buddies would go something like this: "look what I did last night"
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Any more comments/pointers from the pros. I would really appreciate any and all critcism.

I am wanting to improve my beginners skills.

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