I think it must be a terrible injustice to the model. Her hair blends with the background giving her a helmet almost. This blending carried further down the image provide a neck which is wider than her face.
Her posture provides shoulders that have very little or no definition indicating less than stellar weight control, (usually active and physically fit people have greater definition in the shoulder blades).
Here eyes have been whitened too much to and the blurring or softness n her face is also excessive.
Sorry for what may appear to be excessive criticism, as we are all constantly learning and growing in this field, and wish our work to be warmly accepted, but I would not show this to anyone. And would not expect he model to come back for another shoot.