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Old 08-21-2005, 11:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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another picture - critiques !!!!!!

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Re: red sofa - tell me more
Old 08-21-2005, 11:14 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like models to be looking at me - unless you are selling the sofa. I would like to see the cropping not shave off the sofa leg or so close to arm. Otherwise it is quite interesting.
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Seems to be hot spots on forehead and knees. I think it would better without the toes showing. This is more like a fashion shot than a glamour shot. It would be better, in my view to have the subject looking at the camera.



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Frederick - what are the main differences between fashion and glamour shoot?

Well otherwise it's ment to be a fashion shot.
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Old 08-22-2005, 01:06 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Fashion is more characterized by an emphasis on the clothing of the model and often features the model not making eye contact with the viewer. When a model make eye contact it tends to put the viewer toward the model and away from the fashion and is thus considered more likley a glamour shot.



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Old 08-22-2005, 01:17 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Many, many Thanks, - the shoot was made for an fashion designer, so the purpose is right.

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Old 08-23-2005, 05:02 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Try to use less overall light in the "studio" and use a filter to get down all these "whites" in her skin... In my opinion you'll get a better picture
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Old 08-26-2005, 10:46 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I am having troubles agreeing with any of these critiques...anyone who says, I don't like the hot spots here or there...better have a badass shot to back it up with, and a portfolio to back that up with.

What I don't like and its and easy fix, get the model and chair away from the wall...it looks like she is imprisoned.

Bottom line work your model and work your props...

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Could you have her hold a glass of wine or cigarette with her left hand?
Add more of an enjoying life in the chair aspect to the photo.
And, perhaps, turn the chair more to the camera. That should fix the toe issue.
Assuming you could get a chance to re-shoot...
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