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Old 08-19-2005, 06:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi!
Here is my first post here.
ould appreciate any suggestions/comments.




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Old 08-19-2005, 06:32 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi

I normally like tighter crops but this is too tight - you lost the top of her head and her chin. For me this would have been improved by taking it portrait style instead of landscape as you posted here.



I think this is a good example of when a headshot is better taken as a landscape.
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Old 08-19-2005, 07:05 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Works for me. Sweet smile and attention getting crop. You must be our only Russian member...welcome. Post some more of her for us. -Jim



Yea...maybe her chin would have been nicer.
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I am also a fan of tight crops but I think that I would have included all of the chin at the expense of a little less forehead. The reason is this. By aiming the camera slightly lower you move her eyes and also her lips into the classic "rule of thirds" positions.

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I love it. Very Pleasing and peacefull. Great Shot! I agree that vertical may have enhanced it, but overall its a nice image.
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