Trying again ... first model shoot ... Please critique

Hey all,
I messed up my earlier post so I'm trying again. Please click on the following link and critique my first attempt at a model shoot. Thanks.

Click to view Autumn

[Bonner]

Nice gallery of tightly cropped images. The shoe was neat and would be even better if you crop out the other shoe. All on the soft side, maybe compression from site or your intentions. -Jim

[jackell]

You will probably get a better respoinse if you pick 1 or 2 to post in the message.
I know there's no way I'm going to comment on each of those... nothing against them per se, but I don't have that kind of time opr inclination.
Good luck
Jack

p.s for what its worth what I saw wasn't so bad.