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Any thoughts on how I can improve #1?
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okay just for you....since I hung up my critiquing shoes...and went more for the GG Admiration Society Pick the ones i like and comment only...
But I'll break it for you.....the problem Im having ...is she looks a bit thicker in the middle than she is....I think its because her midrift is shoot straight on in combination with the reflective and loose fitting top...if you could have shot this at more of angle...I think he would have thinned the mid section...but what the heck do I know....I screw up more than I do good!
Now I have to hang my shoes back up!