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New Model Sarah, (n)
Old 08-13-2005, 08:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is Sarah, and these are from her first shoot, I met her on myspace and she's another cold call success. She was very easy to work with, and 100% not shy about anything. she gave me everything I asked for, and was even willing to keep shooting in the rain. We were supposed to shoot again this morning but she developed food poisoning and had to cancel. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img]

Hopefully I'll get another chance before she leaves for college in Missouri.

Comments and criticisms are appreciated.



Okay so yeah shes up against a tree, but a tree is not a wall, in fact a tree is a good full step away from a wall. Right?



Yes more tree.




Look no tree at all. in fact right out in the open.



Lemme know whatcha think?
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Re: New Model Sarah, (n)
Old 08-14-2005, 11:23 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I'm distracted by the tan lines in a couple of them. Now, where did I put that bottle of Coppertone....
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Re: New Model Sarah, (n)
Old 08-14-2005, 04:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Yeah, the tan lines were a bit of a problem, Sarah is a life guard full time and had less than a week to try and get rid of them before the shoot.

Any suggestions on how to do some digital surgery on them?
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Re: New Model Sarah, (n)
Old 08-15-2005, 09:23 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hmmmm, coming to Missouri for college? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Re: New Model Sarah, (n)
Old 08-17-2005, 05:47 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Just like to say keep sharing your images, I've checked out a few of your other posts and got some good tips.

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I like #2 the best. You might want to try a shallower depth of field to make the background less distracting. I think the models arms need to be in a different position to make her body and arms appear more slender. Perhaps a tighter more flattering pair of jeans could help also.

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Re: New Model Sarah, (n)
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I wasn't 100% sure how much the background needed to be blurred, and I'm not sure If the tire swing needs to be there or not.

I wasn't a huge fan of her jeans, but she LOVED them, and they were the only pair she brought and this was my first chance to shoot in a pair that were loose so I went with it.

As far as her arms go. Yeah, I know. I'm still not great getting them in the right position. Just not sure what to do with them.

Thanks for the compliment. I keep trying. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img]
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