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Old 08-10-2005, 03:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Shot with Mykayla for the second time yesterday. This image caught my eye the second I snapped it. Would love to hear some thoughts.

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Old 08-10-2005, 03:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks like your hair light was hitting her hand. The difference in brightness between the hand and her face is a bit distracting to me. My eye keeps getting drawn to the hand. I am sure someone will bring up the crop below the knees but that doesnt bother me at all in this shot. Very nice.

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Old 08-10-2005, 06:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Mykayla is very lovely looking. I would like to see more images from the shoot. The hand highlight is less of a problem for me than the background. Red and white always get the eye's attention...and in glamour shooting, the model is where you want the viewer's eye to go, and stay!


Try to work it a little in PS with your favorite blur and tone it down and see what you think. And yes, a crop above the knee and some of the background would help in my opinion.

One last thing that I noticed. I know it is the style, but I would have had the black straps removed to give her a more sensual look.



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