Mykayla is very lovely looking. I would like to see more images from the shoot. The hand highlight is less of a problem for me than the background. Red and white always get the eye's attention...and in glamour shooting, the model is where you want the viewer's eye to go, and stay!
Try to work it a little in PS with your favorite blur and tone it down and see what you think. And yes, a crop above the knee and some of the background would help in my opinion.
One last thing that I noticed. I know it is the style, but I would have had the black straps removed to give her a more sensual look.
It is good to see someone from Oregon in the forum.