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Old 08-09-2005, 11:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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i don't do many day time shoots. but here's one of them:



i like to do a lot of high contrast black and white.

so if anyone could review my picture, that'd be great thanks! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Old 08-10-2005, 12:07 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I guess I'll start. I love the shadow on the steps, and how it widens as it gets closer to the model then spreads out at the bottom. A perfect example of a leading line IMO. It takes my eye right to the model. The choice of the location is also a good one.

But the thing that makes this image fall short for me is the models pose, expression, her jacket, and the shadow on her right leg. If you worked more with the model to fine tune her pose and expression, and were careful with the shadows, this would be a much better image.
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