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Old 08-06-2005, 08:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi, I'm new to GarageGlamour. I'd really appreciate any critique on this shot. Thanks!
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Re: nightshoot
Old 08-06-2005, 08:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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it looks like you enterred the image information incorrectly, because I don't see anything except some text. Not even the traditional "red X". But I'm not sure whether the deviant art site allows external linking.

However, I visited the image - but can't really comment b/c my laptop's display is quite poor, so I can't really judge the image's contrast, saturation, or even color balance. [Does look a bit yellow or orange on my screen and rather dark, but that may be meaningless.]

I like the styling. You ought to try posting it here again; most won't run down the image.



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Old 08-06-2005, 10:36 PM   #3 (permalink)
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hmm it's linking properly on my computer. i tried to put it in my portfolio but for some reason it wasn't working. i was getting the "page not found" screen.

here, maybe this will work:

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Old 08-07-2005, 12:52 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Interestingly, the first image loads now. I cleared my cache, so it isn't from having visited your deviantart page. However, the image immediately above doesn't - it gives the "red X box."

Maybe it's just me....?
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Old 08-07-2005, 10:41 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i had some problem getting it to work also. but im glad it shows up now. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Old 08-07-2005, 11:37 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I think the picture has a magazine as quality to it!
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Old 08-07-2005, 11:53 PM   #7 (permalink)
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haha thanks! not quite magazine quality though [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]. i'm still very new at portrait photography, and it shows [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]
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Old 08-08-2005, 09:28 AM   #8 (permalink)
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I like it! Its very stylish and cool. I have recently been working on a night shooting project myself and wow is there ever a lot to learn.



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Old 08-08-2005, 02:29 PM   #9 (permalink)
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thanks! being new to portrait photography, i find that there's always something to learn [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Re: nightshoot
Old 08-08-2005, 06:22 PM   #10 (permalink)
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art, if you are really new at portrait work, you had a very good outing here. I love the fact the colors are off, the overall dark tones, and the single light source. It just comes across as one of those images that shouldn't be color corrected, lit perfectly, and looking like every other portrait. The choice of her coat and how it reacts with the chain link in the background is pleasing, as well as the fact that its darker and brings focus to her face. I also like the repeating V pattern of her necklace and her open jacket. Without her glasses, I don't think it would have the same impact.
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